You will never know that
You were like a dream in my life.
You will never know that
I did not assume that I need you so much.
You will never know that
Every day I am writing to you.
You will never know that
It is not so easy to let you go.
All is Okay.
I will never cry.
I will smile
Looking in the sky.
We have a lot of time
To find our way.
Who knows
What awaits us in the future.
But I believe that
All these years
You felt my support.
I let you go,
I let you go forever.
I let my love.
I let myself.
You will never come.
And I will never let you in my home. / And I will never open the door.
04.11.2010. Jelena Goncarova
You were like a dream in my life.
You will never know that
I did not assume that I need you so much.
You will never know that
Every day I am writing to you.
You will never know that
It is not so easy to let you go.
All is Okay.
I will never cry.
I will smile
Looking in the sky.
We have a lot of time
To find our way.
Who knows
What awaits us in the future.
But I believe that
All these years
You felt my support.
I let you go,
I let you go forever.
I let my love.
I let myself.
You will never come.
And I will never let you in my home. / And I will never open the door.
04.11.2010. Jelena Goncarova
Онлайн рецензия To A.G
Произведение написано очень искренне, но, увы это пока не стихи, а стихотворный опыт.
Размер не выдержан, нарушен ритм и мелодика, рифма слабая (просто нет).
Попытайтесь написать на русском языке. Это поможет.
Изучите основы теории стихосложения. Читайте великих поэтов-классиков.
Успехов!
С уважением, Хантер.